I am learning to write a plan before I write my story. It was easy to make a small moments. I was able to match my plan and my writing. I will use a plan again.
Liam
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on Saturday I went to Hobbiton
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I saw everything and I watched the movie after.
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On Saturday I went to Hobbiton. It was a long trip in the bus. I felt happy. I saw everything and I watched the movie afterwards. I went with my mum and my dad and Jackson. There were Hobbit holes and the party tree! There was fake moss on it. The tree was big.
1 comment:
Well done. You are learning to use the ideas in your plan to write your story.
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