Friday 28 November 2014

Tuesday 18 November 2014

Jack and the Beanstalk


 I.A.L.T
write a fairytale
I forgot my fullstops so Mrs Rist said hmm
hmm hmm. Why didn't you put fullstops in your writing?"
I was to busy with my describing words and forgot to do it.

Once upon a time there was a boy called Jack. He lived with his mum and the cow with spots  that didn’t give milk.  They lived in a  wooden cottage. They were super poor! So she said take the cow to the market and get  so special money.  So he sold the cow for magic mysterious beans. He took the beans home and showed them to his mum. His mum said “you sold the cow for plain BEANS!!’’ And angrily threw the beans out the window.  The next morning Jack saw the green beanstalk so he clamibed it. At the top of the beanstalk there was  a  green big hugger huge giant. And saw a  magic golden harp so he stole the harp and show it to this mum his mum said stelling is not good said Jack mum so he stole a mysterious chicken that laid golden eggs and stole some more shiney gold$$$  he ran down the green beanstalk and cut down the beanstalk before the  hugger giant climbed down the beanstalk and they were rich and they lived happily ever after.