Making a Plan

I am learning to write a plan before I write my story.  It was easy to make a small moments.  I was able to match my plan and my writing. I will use a plan again.

Liam

on Saturday I went to Hobbiton

I saw everything  and  I watched the movie after.

On Saturday I went to Hobbiton. It was a long trip in the bus. I felt happy. I saw everything and I watched the movie afterwards. I went with my mum and my dad and Jackson. There were Hobbit holes and the party tree! There was fake moss on it. The tree was big. 

Making Connections

 I am learning to make a connection. It was hard to compare the characters and my self. now I am going  to do to difit characters.